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[null,"IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs"]
[null,"Submission"]
["Designator:","doc.: IEEE 802.11-23/0222r1"]
["Venue Date:","February 2023"]
["First Author:","Joseph LEVY, InterDigital"]
[]
["Subject:","Draft Comments for 802.11 CC44 - Comment Collection of P802-REVc D1.0"]
["Full Date:","2023-02-27"]
["Author(s):","Name(s)","Joseph Levy"]
[null,"Affiliation","InterDigital"]
[null,"Address","111 W 33rd St., New York, NY,USA"]
[null,"Phone: ","+1. 631.622.4129"]
[null,"Fax: "]
[null,"email: ","joseph.levy@interdigital.com"]
["Abstract:"]

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["Please provide comments on P802-REVc D1.0. "]
["Close Date: 01-Mar-2023 23:59:59 ET"]
["Click on column headers for help"]
["Comment","Category","Page Number","Subclause","Line Number","Proposed Change","Must Be Satisfied","802.11 ARC SC Notes - not to be submitted as part of the comments"]
["The term \"data devices\" is not well defined and does not add clarity.","Technical",32,4.2,3,"Replace: “support various data devices” \nwith “support communication between”"]
["IOT devices should be included in the list of \"data devices\" ","Technical",32,4.2,11,"Insert:   \"IOT devices such as:\" before Thermostats, and make T in thermostats lower case. "]
["Other phones may use 802 to communicate","Technical",32,4.2,10,"Append \"and VOIP phones (desk phones)\" to \"Mobile phones\"."]
["\"which\" should be proceeded by a comma","Editorial",34,5.0999999999999996,15,"Add comma as shown: \"… implementation models (IMs), which are more …\""]
["A \"Harvard\" comma was removed, its removal made this complex sentence unclear and difficult to parse.  It is suggested to either: 1) reduce the complexity of this sentence by breaking it in to more than one sentence or 2) add the comma back in. ","Editorial",40,"5.3.2.5",16,"Add comma as shown: \"… separate LANs, bridged LANs, or virtual bridged\nLANs …\""]
["The passive voice is used","Editorial",43,"7.2.2",37,"Replace the sentence with: \"An agent is an entity that communicates the network  management protocol and interacts with  managed objects.\"",null,"The term \"agent\" is not used any where else in IEEE Std 802, except in this location.  Is it useful that the entity defined in the standard? Should this sentence simply be deleted? "]
["\"Agent\" is not used elsewhere in the specification, therefore there is no need to define it. ","Technical",43,"7.2.2",37,"Delete \"The entity that does the network communication of the management protocol and the interaction to and from the managed objects is called the agent.\"",null,"Discussion during the 2023-02-27 ARC SC teleconference, noted that there is no need to define \"agent\". "]
["Missing or extra parenthesis, there is a hanging close parenthesis. ","Editorial",1,null,5,"Delete the parenthesis following \"IEEE Std 802fTM-2023\"",null,"Also note amendment 802f has not yet been added to the draft, as it has not yet been published."]
["IEEE Std 802.17 is a withdrawn standard (as of 2016), there should be no reference to 802.17 in the draft.  Therefore the \"Bridging example\" in 5.3.2.6 should be replaced.","Technical",40,"5.3.2.6",23,"Replace the clause with an example not using IEEE 802.17TM, currently found at page 40 line 33, page 40 line 34, page 40 line 35 and Figure 8 page 41"]
["Figure B.5 should be updated to align with Figure 4-24 in IEEE Std 802.11-2020. Note: there is error in the figure as the Physical Layer is called the \"PHY\" Sublayer, instead of simply the \"PHY\". But, this error has to be corrected in the 802.11 specification, before it can be corrected elsewhere. ","Technical",72,"B.2",1,"Replace Figure B.5 with Figure 4.25 in IEEE Std 802.11-2020, page 279, top of page."]

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["Draft Standard P802-REVc/D1.0; January, 2023; Revision of IEEE Std 802®-2014 as amended by IEEE Std 802d™-2017, IEEE Std 802c™-2017 and IEEE Std 802f™-2023); \"Draft Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks\""]